Wednesday, November 17, 2010

The hero Max


By Kiyah

    Once there was a boy and his name is Max. Max was at school and he was doing a project with is teacher and they were using construction paper. They made paper dictionary just to have fun. Well he went home at the end of the day and he did a assignment for his school in Reno and his school name is north high. Well his home work was to do some research on a dog and his body. Well the week went on and he's been going to school and doing good.

    Well it was week two and he just found out that he has x-ray vision. Well his x-ray vision is doing well. Well now he is the school hero because whenever someone Is hurt he can look at their bones and see if any are broken or chipped their bone really bad. Well now he is out of school and he is now a detective and he saves people. He always had trouble on vocabulary and now he knows how to do cursive.

    Well Max's dose not works as a detective because he did not want to be hero anymore. Well now Max has his own monopoly I and it is called the tie store. That really is the name of the store. Also he made the ties creative like his hat. His hat looks like his ties. His ties have a whole bunch of crazy art.

DREAM HOUSE

By Stephanie

My name is Stephanie. And I work as and I builder. Went to my job to build a house and my boss gave me construction paper. The bosses name is mike.
I started drawing and I got an idea I got creative. To me it was a dream house. The boss came and he said it was not good I apologized. I got really sad. When I got home I did an experiment. I redid my room.

It was not my dream house but it was my dream rooms love it. I went to bed and I woke up and I went to work. I thought I throw away my contraction paper that had my dream house but the boss saw it and he liked it. He said that maybe I could have a monopoly. I got really happy.

And people were saying that I might have monopoly. A week went by and all of this was reputation. I went to work again today was hard. We finished two houses. And mike let me build my dream house. At the end I moved in to my dream house. I had a monopoly

The imaginative girl

By Zucely


 

Once upon a time there was a girl named Stephanie Martinez she lived in a big house in Mexico. She went to school every Monday to Friday. She is in 6th grade. One day she said that she liked that school because she learns a lot. She was really imaginative. She knew cursive a lot.

She said that she didn't think that 6th grade was complex. She really likes to use dictionary and
encyclopedia. She is really creative because she likes to create new stuff. Sometimes she likes to do experiments. One thing she has that is scary is that she has X-ray Vision.

When she writes definition she writes them in construction
paper. I think I should ask her to show how to be like her and then I would know how to learn at school. Even though I don't think I would learn but it does not hurt to try. I might succeed and I could help other people succeed like me. That is imaginative girl.

Mrs. Teacher lady

By Bryce M.

Hello my name is Bobby gorgonswanze long name right. Well here's what I have to tell you.

I live in a small town in Oklahoma it is so small it doesn't even have a name. It was the first day of school in 5th grade. All of my friends had heard stories about Mrs. Teacher lady. Some people say she has x ray vision. Others say she cuts you with construction paper if you talk in here class.

She gives you 20 assignments a day and if you don't finish them you have to look up 15 words in the dictionary during recess. Well I went there and I couldn't stand here and punched her in the face 5 minutes through the day.

Find a word

By Tinh

     One day I want to find a word, but I can't find in vocabulary, then I look in the dictionary find I find my word. But is cursive I can't read.


 

    then I took the book to Pedro if he can read for me, but no, then I took the book to Mrs. Jones see if she can read, but I see her made something of construction paper, and I ask her if she can read to me she says "yes" she read then tell me was it's, findnaly I get it.


 

    Then I finish my assignment, but I'm not look in a encyclopedia but is
o.k. some book attendance. Thank to Mrs. Jones, she are profound. That is my story.


 


 


 

The Scared Monkeys

By Taylor C.


One day the five monkeys were about to die. So they got an encyclopedia to find facts about how to survive. But they could not find anything. They thought that the dictionary would work. But that did not work ether.

The next day the five monkeys got scared because a skunk walked by. They ran so fast that they hit a bird with a mustache. All the monkeys apologized to the bird with the mustache. He said it was alright. Then the five monkeys found a survive book in a tree. One monkey went up the tree and got it down. Another monkey opened the book. One ether monkey said 'I can't read cursive.' The monkey leader said 'this is complex.' But the skunk came over and scared them again. The skunk said 'stop.' They looked at her and said why. She said I know how to read.

The monkeys were so happy. But they did not want to do this no more. Because they wanted to be creative with construction paper. And that was there new assignment. Also they wanted to experiment a dead bug. And they all wanted to have x-ray vision. And they never wanted to do that again.

Party at midnight

By Maricela


My name is Jenifer Olsen I live in Laguna Beach in a big house. My mom is Susan Olsen and my dad is Ryan Olsen. I'm an only child with lots of friends. My friends are Taylor. A, Taylor .c, Madison, Bertha, Martye, Cianni, Bryce, Owen, and a lot more….

My friends Taylor a, Taylor c and Madison said they would help me with my party. While she was doing that Taylor a, Madison, and I had to be Taylor c went to get purple and black construction paper for the big signs that say midnight. very creative with our decorating. We had a reputation to finish this awesome party.

Taylor c was back with the construction paper and she wrote midnight party on the paper with cursive writing. Taylor C had an imaginative mind she decorated the walls with confetti and strings so perfectly. I was so happy how the party was coming out so perfect and, that I had my friends to help me. If my mom was helping me I would've had a detective theme boring.

The party was finished and my friends started flooding in. It was the best party it was finally midnight everyone left with a big hug from me. The next day was school everyone kept saying awesome party. We had lots of assignments in class. It really sucked then the teacher gave us words to research and to look up in the dictionary great, just what a kid wants after a great party. But homework is not going to ruin the best day of my life!

    

The Mysterious Man

By Pedro

    Once there was a boy named Erik. He was a poor kid from the hood in Compton, L.A. He was a trouble maker. Everywhere he went he would talk about how he's hood. A lot of people liked him in school. Girls thought he was cool and cute because he was a bad boy and had abs. He had an assignment on George Lopez. He had to tell about his life in 1 week. He asked girls if they could help him out but they said they had to go home. When Erik walked home when the girls left and was approached by a man in black. The man had a black trench coat. He asked Erik about his reputation. Erik said, "who you punk." The man says, "Look you ignorant weasel I asked you a question." Erik was not scared at all. He said, "Forget you monkey face punk." He walked straight turned around and the man was gone.

    Erik didn't tell anybody about his encounter with the man. Erik walked to a girl and said, "Let's go to a restaurant." She slapped him and walked away. Later he was in his classroom when he looked outside. The man was there with a knife. Erik received a letter his teacher saying:

I got your parents and your next buddy.

Erik showed his teacher the letter. "Oh My God" said the teacher. She let Erik go home. He got there and said, "MOM! DAD!" No answer. He didn't have time to research on George Lopez. He looked everywhere for them and no one was there. He apologized for doing things he wasn't supposed to. The Man was in his house. Erik turned around and was stabbed once in the head. He fell immediately. The man dragged him to the basement. Erik woke up and was tied to a chair. He said, "So is this your lair you stoner." The man punched him twice. He ice put it three inches from Erik's back and used a blow torch. Erik screamed in pain. "OWWWWW!!! You freaking maniac. What do you want?" The man said, "It's an experiment." He put Erik on the floor and kicked him.

Erik was lying there bloody. The man left to get water and Erik lit a match and grabbed an air freshener. When the man came back Erik lit him on fire. The house set on fire to. The cops arrived and Erik just walked way.

Erik's parents were found by a detective hanging from a tree bloody and stabbed. The man's body hasn't been found in the house. Erik was found dead at a beach with stab wounds.

There was a funeral for the family. They had a memorial at school. A woman from San Antonio was missing.He heeefa

Who Did It?

By Brian

One day there was a boy who had blue construction paper. He was going to write a whole dictionary on it….but his dictionary was stolen. He went all around town to find it. The boy only knows that the dictionary was in cursive writing. He thought who ever stole it better be apologizing to him. SO THE BOY CALLED AND HIRED A DETECTIVE TO RESEARCH THIS CRIME. Later the boy went home and told his dad that his book has been stolen. His dad was mad at who ever

The next day he heard on the news that there was a robber back in town stealing books and crafts. The boy said that he now knows where the robber is hidden. With the boys creative mind he could plan a set up to catch the mysterious robber. Later that day he went to the store to buy some materials he needs to plan this setup. Now in Los Angeles, place he the boy was in the knew the mysterious robber is. The detective he hired met up with him and his assignment was complete. Now behind a monopoly store the robber arrived.


 

The boy had a thin line going across the backyard, trip!!!!!!The robber tripped and there it was the boy's dictionary. As soon as the robber tripped he grabbed it and went home. The next day he had school and was a perfect attendance student of the year. At the end of the day he got another prize for his complex experiment. His mom and dad were so proud of it he got 50 bucks from them right out of his dad's wallet.

Advice from Pedro

I would tell them middle school is fun and to just to stay calm. Also I would tell them to not say anything bad to older kids. I would help them if they wanted it because I would have finished sixth grade by then. I've learned a lot in my 3 months in middle school. So if a kid wanted to ask me anything about it I would tell them how different it is from elementary school. Kids might not take my advice but some will.

Advice- an opinion you give someone on what to do

Advise- to tell someone what you think they should do, especially when you know more than they do about something:

Zucely’s Advice

The advice I would give a youngster is that middle school is harder but not much . You will have harder work but you'll learn . you will get after school detention if you don't pay attension. If you get in detension you will have to stay from three to four.

Monday, November 15, 2010

The Cafeteria Makes Me Lose My Lunch

At lunch time the cafeteria becomes a very scary place. In fact, many students feel like they might lose their lunches when in the cafeteria. Some days the cafeteria smells nice. Most days it smells like a mixture of cleaning fluids and overcooked bologna. Lunch is not a peaceful experience in our cafeteria. In fact, it is the opposite. Noise, bad smells, and disgusting foods are three of the reasons I don't enjoy dining in our cafeteria.