Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Tinh’s Story

By tinh

I stepped into room and noticed a picture frame tipped over. No one else should have been here.

One night I come to my room is was dark, and I hear one noise, like one big animal breath, I'm so scared, but I was home alone, I don no was to do, I think when I run that animal is hear me, so I run to my mom room , I know my mom have a stick, so I run to her room to get the stick.

I got the stick, I was happy because I got the stick, and the animal don hear, I run back to my room, I ho the stick, I turned on the light and is was the dog.


 

I say was are you doing here. The dog gung run outside , I was laughing, my mom and dad home. I never have like that.


 

The night of scared and fun.

Thursday, October 21, 2010

Halloween

    By Maricela

    The moment I opened my eyes, I knew I was going to die that day. What was I going to do I was so scared it was Halloween night. My friend Taylor c and I were trapped in a haunted house. People came to the haunted house and were never seen again. Taylor and I ran door to door we looked everywhere to escape no luck.

    An hour later we were still there with no food water or anything. Oh my God said Taylor. As soon as I could ask what's wrong we heard a loud noise in the kitchen. Someone was here in the kitchen there was no were for us to run or hide. Taylor grabbed my arm and ran to the living room.

     We were sitting behind the sofa waiting for what's next. Then we heard a man's voice saying "run if you can but I'll find you."I wanted to just run but Taylor said "don't move be very quiet." So I was quiet until he looked behind the sofa. Me and Taylor screamed and ran so fast! We where banging on the front door since the house was on lockdown there was no use.

    Then someone opened the door cause we where banging so loud. Turns out it was a cop we didn't die and the man chasing us was a murderer. He went to jail and me and Taylor will never go to the haunted house again.

Assassin’s story

By Bryce M.

The moment I opened my eyes I knew I was going to die that day. I am an assassin I'm going to keep my name counseled for my own protection. This is my story.

One morning on a cold winter's day I was called to assassinate a man named john, mister. So I grabbed my 9 mm and a silencer and went to work on trying to find him. About 3 hours later I found him in an apartment parking lot.

Bad luck for me he was standing with five other men. So I wait there in my car investigating what I saw. Two of the men looked like drug dealers I couldn't tell what the other ones where.

Then I saw my target leaving the scene. So I got out of my car and followed him down ales and around houses. He must have sensed something suspicious because he started running.

Then without warning he turned around and shot me in the leg. Then he walked up to me and tried to shoot me in the head but I triped him with my good leg and slit his throat. So that's my story

Time To Party

By Stephanie

It was Christmas morning, but I was the only one home.

I thought my mom and dad went with my aunt's house.

I got so sad because I wanted to open gifts .But no I wasn't there to open gifts. I got really sad and depress.

I wanted to go but I don't know she live at. I think she live in Mexico. I just sat there thinking how I have missed this. My mom and dad forgot me their only daughter. I got an idea I'm going to call my dad. So I did I called him then I heard a ring. My dad forgot his cell. Then I thought I could through a party. I invited my friend to help me. Soon they came we bought decorations and snacks and drinks. Then at 4:34 the party started soon I called my cousins so they could come to the party. They did. I saw a really cute guy walk in my door. My friend were telling me to go and talk to him. And I did but then his phone rang. And it was his girlfriend. I got so mad at him I wanted to punch him. Then I saw two adults. Their mom and my dad. I hidden under a pink long table. I sneeze. My mom looked under the pink long table. My dad told every body to go. And I got grounded.


 

My last day

By Ethan

The moment I opened my eyes, I knew I was going to die that day. It was a Saturday afternoon I was on my bed eating pop-tarts and watching TV. It was like any other weekend but I wasn't aware of what awaited me in a few hours. My name is Danny Smith, I live in CA.

I was a normal kid nothing bad ever happened to me I was an only child too! I went into the kitchen and outside the window I saw a few manlike shadows going to the front of the house. I ran into the garage grabbed my dad's gun and ran into my bedroom closet. All of the sudden I heard a few shouts and heard footsteps from the hallway, then it was dead silent. Then I saw them in my room there was about five men dressed in black and had masks on I was so scared I called 911 and then the lady said "911 what is your emergency" I said "t-there are five men that are inside my house" the lady asked " are you alone" I said " Yes" she said " help is on the way"

A few days later my mom and dad had gotten a news paper my father opened it the headline said " 12 year old boy all alone calls 911 and gets 5 of fbi's most wanted men behind bars. He was so proud, he even took me to baskin robins.

But to my amazement when I went to school on Monday all my friends said how cool it was that I was on the headline on the newspaper and I was the #1 story of the month in my town, I felt so happy that I will never have to go through that sacredness ever again.

The Chase

    By Harrison

    "Put it down!" The man said. The officer Max. The crook Took the package and ran for his car and drove of the police right behind him. The crook swerving wildly through the LA traffic. Max called for backup he knew he had to stop him from hurting any innocent people. Backup finally arrived the police put down spike strips. The car swerved out of the way.

The crook accelerated 80…90…100. The cops needed to stop him quick. 4 hours passed and he was still going the police said let him go well continue tomorrow were almost out of fuel well keep the choppers on him. They went to refuel And then they were back on the chase. The car turned on a dirt road that dead ended with a huge gap. The car didn't slowdown it sped up 110…120…130. The car hit a pile of dirt and like a bird it flew over the gap. No one knows what happened to the car.


 


 


 

The Premonition

By Pedro

The moment I opened my eyes, I knew I was going to die that day. My name is Johnny Money. I've been having premonitions about death which always has something to do with a man in a dark suit carrying a pistol. Tonight it was my birthday. It was raining hard outside and the air was cold and damp. We were having a small party at my place. My brother "rabbit" was having a great time ruining everything. He was annoying me all day. I said, "out of my face lizard." He said, "Man I ain't listenin to you. " Then I socked the little lizard in his mouth.

My mom came out and said, "What's going on here?" I said, "The little brat was up in my face and I popped him one in the eye." Then the power went out. Everyone was gone. The air was silent until a man in a dark suit with a pistol came and shot me. He said, "That'll keep you quiet dog food. He then left and spit on me.

I woke up and was hurting. I was in my room. I thought I was dead. I tried to get up but my leg had a bullet wound in it. I never thought living in Compton would be so bad until I had the premonitions. I said, "Is anybody there?" No answer.

It was only 8:00 p.m. It all happened 1 hour ago. I went outside crawling. Another man was outside and attacked me. He said, "How you alive gum drop. I asked "How's your dumb face?" He kicked me 6 times. He took me in his ride. We arrived at a building. He dragged me to the top of the building. "Hey gum drop were here" he said. I said, "Buzz off monkey face." He punched me.

He said, "Think about the next thing you say dog." Finally the dark-suited man appeared. He told me, "Hey dog food." I said, "Step off jerk face." He punched me to. I was all bruised. I was bleeding badly. He told me if I was ready to die. I got up and said, "Watch out!!!" He looked away and I grabbed his gun and shot him 7 times. We both fell off the building ending our lives. My premonitions are true and I did die because of the man in a dark suit.

Jimmy the Failure

By Owen

Put it down!" the man yelled. Jimmy put down bob. Bob ran away screaming like a girl. The store manager yelled at jimmy for scaring bob away. Then jimmy had liquid in his pants. Jimmy quit that day.

Jimmy tried moving on to better things. But he could not he missed being night manager at k mart. His boss was happy jimmy was a total putze. Jimmy tried being a bank receptionist. He quit that to he hated it.

Jimmy was a total failure he sucked at every thing. His mom even said he sucked. Jimmy wanted to run away forever. He told his mom bye and then slapped her. He ended up in las angelas.

He found a girl namned butox and dated her. Jimmy was in love. Butox said jimmy was not a failure jimmy said woman what do you Know. Butox got really really mad. Jimmy apologized to her. Butox blushed.

Jimmy bought a one bedroom apartment and married butox. He found a job at stator brothers as a clerk. Jimmy loved it. He married butox and had nine kids. Jimmy was not a failure after all.


 

THE MiSSING PARENTS

By Dulce

     It was Christmas morning, but I was the only one home. I wondered why no one was home. I wondered why no one was home, and then I got scared. So, I went to all the rooms but no one was there.

    Once I was done checking all the rooms, I wondered if I should go outside and check for them there. I looked everywhere but they weren't nearby. Then I thought of something!!! My idea was to call them on their phone, it so happens that they left their phone at home.

    After that I got tears in my eyes. I wanted to cry but I took back those tears and looked outside one more time. When I looked outside they were home! I got really excited!!!

    After I saw them I ran to go give them a hug. I started telling them all that I did to get contact with them. Then they told me that what I did was really smart. At last they showed me my Christmas gift and I got happy.


 


 

Give Me It

By Bryce

"Put it down!" the man yelled. My mom looked over she said what is going on. Then the guy said she stole my braw for me. My mom said you have boobies then the guy said can't you tell. Then my mom got the manager to go over there.

The manager said what is going on hear the guy said she taking stuff from my cart. Then the girl disagreed with all the stuff I said. Then the guy said since I'm so nice you can have the braw then the guy just went to Wal-Mart. The manager said thank you for being kind to her. Then the guy left.

Then the guy went to Wal-Mart. Then he saw the perfect one for I'm then he got in another fight with the same lady the next day hey was very mad. He said why do you got to follow me every where. She said because I don't like you. He asked why don't you like me she said because I think your stupid.

The man said why do you think I'm stupid. She answered cause you're a man wherein a braw. The man answered so that doesn't mean any thing. She said yes it does it means your stupid. He said you want to know why I where braw's cause I work dwp.

Then she under standed why he wore braws. Then they said I kind of like you your pretty cute the man said. The lady said thank you sir your kind of cute to. Then they lived happily ever after. That's why the man wore braws.