By Pedro
The moment I opened my eyes, I knew I was going to die that day. My name is Johnny Money. I've been having premonitions about death which always has something to do with a man in a dark suit carrying a pistol. Tonight it was my birthday. It was raining hard outside and the air was cold and damp. We were having a small party at my place. My brother "rabbit" was having a great time ruining everything. He was annoying me all day. I said, "out of my face lizard." He said, "Man I ain't listenin to you. " Then I socked the little lizard in his mouth.
My mom came out and said, "What's going on here?" I said, "The little brat was up in my face and I popped him one in the eye." Then the power went out. Everyone was gone. The air was silent until a man in a dark suit with a pistol came and shot me. He said, "That'll keep you quiet dog food. He then left and spit on me.
I woke up and was hurting. I was in my room. I thought I was dead. I tried to get up but my leg had a bullet wound in it. I never thought living in Compton would be so bad until I had the premonitions. I said, "Is anybody there?" No answer.
It was only 8:00 p.m. It all happened 1 hour ago. I went outside crawling. Another man was outside and attacked me. He said, "How you alive gum drop. I asked "How's your dumb face?" He kicked me 6 times. He took me in his ride. We arrived at a building. He dragged me to the top of the building. "Hey gum drop were here" he said. I said, "Buzz off monkey face." He punched me.
He said, "Think about the next thing you say dog." Finally the dark-suited man appeared. He told me, "Hey dog food." I said, "Step off jerk face." He punched me to. I was all bruised. I was bleeding badly. He told me if I was ready to die. I got up and said, "Watch out!!!" He looked away and I grabbed his gun and shot him 7 times. We both fell off the building ending our lives. My premonitions are true and I did die because of the man in a dark suit.