Wednesday, November 17, 2010

The hero Max


By Kiyah

    Once there was a boy and his name is Max. Max was at school and he was doing a project with is teacher and they were using construction paper. They made paper dictionary just to have fun. Well he went home at the end of the day and he did a assignment for his school in Reno and his school name is north high. Well his home work was to do some research on a dog and his body. Well the week went on and he's been going to school and doing good.

    Well it was week two and he just found out that he has x-ray vision. Well his x-ray vision is doing well. Well now he is the school hero because whenever someone Is hurt he can look at their bones and see if any are broken or chipped their bone really bad. Well now he is out of school and he is now a detective and he saves people. He always had trouble on vocabulary and now he knows how to do cursive.

    Well Max's dose not works as a detective because he did not want to be hero anymore. Well now Max has his own monopoly I and it is called the tie store. That really is the name of the store. Also he made the ties creative like his hat. His hat looks like his ties. His ties have a whole bunch of crazy art.

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