Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Tinh’s Story

By tinh

I stepped into room and noticed a picture frame tipped over. No one else should have been here.

One night I come to my room is was dark, and I hear one noise, like one big animal breath, I'm so scared, but I was home alone, I don no was to do, I think when I run that animal is hear me, so I run to my mom room , I know my mom have a stick, so I run to her room to get the stick.

I got the stick, I was happy because I got the stick, and the animal don hear, I run back to my room, I ho the stick, I turned on the light and is was the dog.


 

I say was are you doing here. The dog gung run outside , I was laughing, my mom and dad home. I never have like that.


 

The night of scared and fun.

1 comment:

  1. good job nice story but check your grammer


    love, gaby and taylor c

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